Monday, May 31, 2010

Revising the Wrong Book

There's something about my dining room (the blinds? the light? the color?) that breeds plot solutions. Many of BRIAR-BOUND's revision fixes came from sitting at that table, talking to the wall about the characters. The biggest change in the last rewrite of BB -- the addition of Stump -- happened in that room.

Well, it happened again yesterday. I wasn't even working on fiction, was choosing science standards for study guide questions. One minute I'm sifting through physical science goals for first graders; next minute, I'm talking to the wall about the history of the Briars. And I found a really elegant way to raise one BB character's stakes and bring two plot points together to a time that's more immediate to the story.

The problem? (Let's overlook that I talk to walls to revise; the Crazy is well documented.) The problem is: I'm not supposed to be revising BB; it's on submission. I'm supposed to be finishing DAUGHTER. And writing science questions.

What do you do when the siren call comes from the wrong project?


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Friday, May 28, 2010

This Week in Victuals!

That title is SEO-approved, I tell ya.

Had some tasty nosh this week. Thought I'd share, in case this is your Friday-night entertainment. (Hey, you can't get fat lookin' at pictures.)(Unless you're chowin' on Fritos and milkshakes while you're lookin'.)(Maybe take a walk afterward. I'll do the same.)

Our first foray into homemade pasta, inspired by Jamie Oliver's Jamie At Home show, in which it took him, like, two minutes to turn a pile of flour into a pile of noodles. Ours were a little thick, so we'll split the dough next time before rolling it. Also, we used cake flour. We've since found the recommended imported Italian flour "Tipo 00". (Fancy)...


Then, because we're all about letting TV shows tell us how to cook, Dave whipped up some AWESOME carnitas (braised + broiled pork shoulder) and elotes (grilled + dressed street corn), recipes courtesy of the good Northern folk at America's Test Kitchen. Dave wasn't so sure about taking a Yank's advice on Mexican food, but these dishes were yummy for two meals this week...



This morning's breakfast: boiled egg, homegrown Lemon Boy tomato w/ fresh dill, black beans, 1/4 avocado, 1/2 mango w/ fresh mint, and 1/2 a sandwich thin...



Ever had bleu cheese cheesecake? Well, you should. We had it first at Bin 555, where it's graced with a sour-cherry sauce. They wouldn't give us the recipe, perhaps because they charge $6 a slice. We love Bin, but 6 bucks a pop adds up, so Dave was all, "I don't need no stinkin' recipe!" and  this week he winged it. Soared with the eagles, peeps. Here's the lowdown (tell your friends - don't pay $6 for a slice of cheesecake!!!):

  • find an oven-safe vessel about 6 inches across
  • crush graham crackers till you have 1 cup
  • melt, oh, let's say... 2 tablespoons of butter
  • mix the crumbs + butter, then press them into the baking dish
  • cream one 8-oz package of cream cheese
  • stir in 1/3 cup bleu cheese crumbles
  • stir in 1 egg
  • stir in 1 tablespoon of sugar if that's how you roll
  • pour the filling into the crust
  • bake @ 300 degrees (F) for 50-60 minutes, or until center is no longer wobbly when you touch it
  • for the cherry sauce, pit and halve 1 cup of sweet cherries (we used Bing)
  • on low heat, cook them with a bit of water and sugar (not much) till they juice out
  • turn off the heat + add a splash of brandy (+ 1-2 teaspoons butter if you like a glossy glaze)
The cake's best if you can wait a few hours while it lounges in the fridge. We didn't wait. Also, because he owns a torch + is a dude, Dave sprinkled some turbinado sugar on top + caramelized it...

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Thursday, May 27, 2010

Eastern Europe: Recs?

Hey, so: quick poll.

We want to travel in December and are considering Eastern Europe -- beautiful and economical. We're familiar with central Czech Republic, the Krakow area of Poland, and the west coast of Croatia (loved the former two; the latter felt like Italy). Dave's been to Budapest; I haven't. We love cold weather and snow, and we tend to travel locally by train. So...

Have you traveled in Eastern Europe? Any favorite spots? Why did you like them?

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Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Race Out, Mileage Up

Saturday night we sat down to make our flight and hotel reservations for the Edge 2 Edge half-marathon. We found our expenses for that trip piling up fast, much higher than what currently rests in our travel savings. Added to the prospect of going into debt for a race was a probable schedule change at Magik that meant this would no longer be a good time to leave town.

Each of us had privately wondered if we should cut our losses (race registration fees) and forego the trip. So, Saturday we said it out loud and made it so.

It was a huge relief: the money in travel savings can grow, and we each got back a week we'll need for work projects. And now when we do do the race, we can run it with Bjoern and Jenny, who discovered it in the first place.

Physically, we could've run it, no problem. Not having the race looming, though, allows us to change our training schedule to meet current needs, namely: we aren't getting enough mileage in a week.

Our speed and hill workouts have been great, but we find we're doing both on hill days: we do four repeats of a long hill, and time ourselves to track improvement. So, we decided to cut the speed-only track runs in favor of a mid-length run. It'll help our distance capacity, and should kick me off of a weight plateau I'm on.

Ever made a fitness goal change you thought would be a bummer but turned out to be really beneficial?


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Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Wanted: Writer. Must Read.

On Sunday, I took the morning and early afternoon to finish THE GIRL WHO PLAYED WITH FIRE.

It was awesome. Not just the book (which has its flaws but also a fascinating character in Lisbeth Salander) but taking the time to read it. Time I could have spent doing other things -- things I get paid to do, things I've signed contracts to do, things on my to-do list, things not remotely leisure-oriented.

But that's just it: reading is no longer just for leisure. The most repeated advice I've read for writers (besides "Write!") is to read as much and as widely as possible. Reading informs our writing. Reading a great story with compelling characters can inspire us to create our own worlds and characters. Reading a master of the craft can change how we put our words on the page. Reading allows (or forces) our brains to work in a different way from writing, the way a short run before/after a long run acts as warm-up/recovery. So we gotta read.

Cool. I love reading. When I finished GIRL/FIRE, I tweeted about it and said I need to treat reading as part of my job now. In other words, I need to schedule reading into my work hours, not just my free time, and feel comfortable doing so. I start today.

Writers, how do you approach reading? Leisure? Job? Do you make time for reading, or fit it in when you can? Do you take advantage of different platforms (like audiobooks) to read more?


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Monday, May 24, 2010

Do You Study Your Favorite Authors?

Frankly, I'm still trying to fit in reading time (more on that tomorrow).

But to learn more about writing craft, I'll need to study how authors do whatever they do well -- imagery, plot construction, clue-planting, story presentation, dialogue, characterization, pacing, etc. There are techniques available to writers that I've never learned. Until I have an editor or take a formal class, some self-directed study will be in order.

I mean, I want to read only for pleasure, yet I think the days of carefree book consumption will soon end because I want more to improve my writing.

Writers, do you study authors' work with intention?  If so, how do you go about doing so? Do you make notes? Map plot structure? Is it an ongoing process or particular to one stage of writing (e.g.: revisions)? Has your study made your writing more effective?


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Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Heart Rate Squid

I get heart palpitations. They're not serious, but my doctor wants to clear me for running races. So I had a cardiac consult a couple weeks ago -- EKG, treadmill stress test, multiple BP readings, ultrasound... the works.

"Everything looks good," Heart Doc said. "Come back in two weeks to get fitted for a 24-hour heart rate monitor."

Cool, I thought. No problem. I pictured this:


...the neat kind you wear during workouts -- the ones that strap around your rib cage and fade into the background.

HA-HA. No. What I got was this:


...only that picture doesn't show the full length of the cables, which hang almost to my knees. I have 5 of those adhesive electrode pads on my chest, secured with layers of medical tape for our planned hill-repeat workout tomorrow morning. Plus the many dangling tentacles cables. Plus the monitor, which is the size of a cheeseburger and clips loosely on my waistband.

I get to go to a Chamber of Commerce meeting today with my squidly get-up. Yay, science! I almost feel like Steve Austin, in the secret government bionics lab. Except I don't go BOI-OI-OI-OING when I run.

Only 23 hours, 23 minutes, and 48 seconds to go.

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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Writers Rating Books: Yea or Nay?

I've been thinking about this a lot lately, then someone tweeted about it yesterday, so I put the question to you:

How do you feel about writers rating books?

I rate the books I read at GoodReads. My ratings are for my reference and are meant to reflect my reading experience with a given book.

But. My GoodReads profile is public. Anyone can go to it and see what I thought of a book. And I'm not sure that's beneficial.

Here's the thing: I think honesty is very important, and I value public figures who are forthright. I've read and respected reviews by authors who give their honest opinions, even when they might hurt the sales of a book.

Which I don't want to do. Not that I have any kind of standing right now, but I hope to make a career in children's lit. And I'm not willing to give everybody 5 stars, or even 4. If someone gave all my books 5 stars, I'd automatically think they were blowing sunshine. I'd rather they gave me an honest 1 or 2. When I see authors giving every book they read 4 or 5 stars, I assume they're trying to help the books' sales. Or they're extremely tolerant of mediocre writing.

Basically, I'm entitled to my opinion, but enjoyment of a book is so subjective that my star ratings shouldn't mean anything to anyone but me. But one day they may, and there's no option to keep them private without making myself a GoodReads hermit. When I started using GoodReads, I just wanted to keep a list of all the books I'd read. But then people wanted to be book buddies and why not? It's a community. I can use all the community I can get. :)

So far, I've been too lazy to write true reviews and have used the stars to sum my experience. I'm starting to think it'd be better to say something like, "If you liked BOOK A or BOOK B, you'll like this one." Then I've moved from rating to recommending. More useful?

What do you think? I mean, what do you REALLY think?

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Monday, May 17, 2010

Blog Chain: Writing Influences

Christine gave us this round's topic:

"Which author or authors have most influenced your writing and how?"

I like clean prose -- let's say that up front. Sure, I toss in some imagery here and there, but for the most part, I like my writing ship-shape. TIDY.

That started with Laura Ingalls Wilder. From first to third grade, I read everything she'd written, and her strong, simple prose stuck with me.

Are there authors whose prose is too simple for my taste? YES. But Wilder got it just right. So did John Steinbeck and Lucy Maud Montgomery, both of whose books read as though they wrote them yesterday. None of the affectations of their respective eras; just straightforward human experience -- his with a dash of despair, hers with humor.

Later influences are harder to pin down. A contest judge told me the way I write children reminds him of how Stephen King does it. Um...SWEET. According to GoodReads, I've read more King than any other author, so I guess it's no surprise he'd be an influence. I'm just glad it shows. :)

I don't deliberately try to reproduce another author's style. I haven't sat down and studied how they do what they do (yet). That said, authors whose work I'd be happy to reflect are:


Whether or not it comes out in my work is for readers to decide.

Click over to read how Cole answered this question before me, then visit Michelle M tomorrow for her post!

What do you think? Do you have authorly influences? Can we judge our influences objectively?

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Friday, May 14, 2010

Children's Book Week: Tasty Tales

In the first year of this blog, I did a series called Thursday Pie Lit, wherein I featured books that in turn featured memorable food descriptions. Several were children's books.

In fact, once upon a time, I considered opening a bakery that featured goods from literature because there's some fun, tasty stuff on those pages. I still have the binder I used to organize the photocopied recipes.

Anyhoo, as Children's Book Week intersects with today's daily special -- food -- I offer links to the Pie Lit posts on kids' books. Enjoy!

BREAD AND JAM FOR FRANCES by Russell Hoban

FARMER BOY by Laura Ingalls Wilder

Hanukkah Stories
(GRANDMA'S LATKES by Malka Drucker
LATKES AND APPLESAUCE by Fran Manushkin
POTATO PANCAKES ALL AROUND by Marilyn Hirsch)

CHARLIE AND THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY by Roald Dahl

THUNDER CAKE by Patricia Polacco

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Thursday, May 13, 2010

Children's Book Week: Westward Ho!

My love of travel was cemented during a 6-week Odyssey of Awesome my parents took us on when I was nine. We set off at dusk from Bloomington and made a great loop around the western U.S. My brother Dwayne turned six in Rocky Mountain National Park. After that, we saw Four Corners, 120-degree days in the Arizona desert, giant sequoias in California, the Cascades in Washington, and Yellowstone geysers.

I was hooked.

But the travel bug showed up before that, not long after I began reading Laura Ingalls Wilder's Little House books. (They influenced my writing, too, but more about that on Monday.) What struck me as a kid were the places she described: the Big Woods of Wisconsin; a dugout house on a creek in Minnesota; a town in South Dakota that saw seven months of winter in a succession of blizzards; and (of course) wide, open prairie in Kansas.

We had woods and creeks and snow in Indiana, but Wilder's descriptions caught my imagination. They made me want to see the places she wrote about. When we set out for our West trip, we rode in a Chinook camper -- Mom and Dad in the front seats, and Dwayne and I up in the loft bed. Weeks of adventure and new places and no school lay ahead. It was pretty easy to imagine we traveled in a covered wagon.

Do you love to travel? What books did you read that fanned the travel flame?

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Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Children's Book Week: Wellness in Play

Remember this book?

In 1976, when I started Girl Scouts and summer day camp and all-day school, this was the book my troop leaders, camp counselors, and gym teachers used to show us how to play together.

Its tagline is "Play hard, play fair, nobody hurt." Sounds good, right? Much better than the "everybody wins" philosophy that followed (come on - teach a kid how to lose gracefully, will ya?).

And the games were fun. Some of them required a parachute, for pete's sake! You luffed it till it billowed high, then ran underneath, huddling with your friends, giggling as it settled over you. Or you joined hands in a big tangle, then had to figure out how to untangle yourselves without breaking your grips.

The New Games Book taught cooperation and patience and fair play. I love seeing this book on someone's shelf today, almost 35 years after it came out. It made healthy, happy kids. It's still making them.

Did you play New Games as a kid? What were your favorites?

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Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Children's Book Week: LINGER Book Trailer

Young adult author Maggie Stiefvater recently posted a trailer for her forthcoming fantasy novel LINGER.

I was already impressed with Maggie for several reasons, one of which is she plays the bagpipes, but then I learned that she designed, filmed, and scored the trailer herself. In fact, she's since posted the process:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5

And here's the finished product...




What is your favorite book trailer? Feel free to link in the comments.

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Monday, May 10, 2010

Children's Book Week: Writing For Kids


Happy Children's Book Week, everyone!

Last Monday, author Suzanne Selfors wrote a guest post on Cynsations titled "Why I Love Writing for Middle Graders." To explain why, she presented a classified ad:

Author Seeks Perfect Reader.
Should possess the following characteristics:

1. Is either a boy or a girl.
2. Is not distracted by hormones.
3. Thinks the opposite sex is rather annoying and doesn't require a story to have the slightest inkling of romance.
4. Doesn't say, "That's not possible" when reading about a mermaid living in a kid's bedroom, or a plant that can make a person fly.
5. Believes that a monster lives under the bed and really wants to meet it...

You can read her entire post here.

What resonated with me in Selfors's post is that this age group (usually) is not cynical. Cynicism kills the ability to fall headlong into a story. Nothing bums me faster than someone who thinks he's seen -- and read -- it all. Middle graders still have wonder. They feel joy at discovery. They like interesting surprises. They believed in kid wizards enough to read over a million words about them.

Those are readers I can get behind!

Why do YOU like writing for your age market? Do you write for pre-readers, early readers, middle graders, young adults, adults, or someone in between? Are there qualities in another age group that make those readers intriguing to you?

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Friday, May 7, 2010

Harvest Tidal Wave: Getting Ready


In May? Yeah, things start rolling early here. Above is a veg lasagna Dave made Monday. I believe it boasted our own basil, squash, and zucchini. So good. But we can't keep making lasagna or I'll be big, like a house.

Gotta put up some goodies.

On my weekend to-do list:

  • attend a local preserving workshop
  • pull out + clean our canning equipment
  • make a list of needed pieces (lids for odd jars, jars for odd lids, extra courage)


Things we expect to get a lot of:

  • cherry tomatoes
  • plum tomatoes
  • peppers
  • cucumbers
  • squash
  • zucchini
  • basil


Currently looking up recipes of sauces, chutneys, pickles, etc, for our garden stuffs. But I want to take advantage of awesome, random sales at our local produce outlet, so jams, jellies, and curds, too.

What are your favorite preserves? Did one of your relatives make them, or did you discover them on your own? Will you make preserves this year, too?

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Thursday, May 6, 2010

He will give you his VAN.

Love this xkcd comic called Google Maps.

On vacation, we used a GPS navigator in the car. The directions got so repetitive, Dave said, "Remember when we flew to France and kept left?"

Ah...putting your well-being in the hands of artificial intelligence.

What was your freakiest Google Maps / Mapquest / GPS experience?

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Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Early Bird Workout

A couple weeks ago, I mentioned we might start getting up early to run.

We did it today -- got over to a local park by 7:30 to do fartlek runs. It was nice and cool, and it feels good now to have done it. We need to wake up about an hour earlier to have relaxed showers and breakfast before work at 9:00.

But I'm glad we did it. Will try again for our next run: hill repeats.

Have you changed up your exercise routine lately? Seen any benefits -- mental or physical?


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Tuesday, May 4, 2010

KATANA: Mark Your Calendars

A quick post to congratulate fellow Upstart Crow Cole Gibsen on the sale of her book (and another)!

Look for KATANA, a YA urban fantasy about a teen who discovers she's a reincarnated samurai, in early 2012.

Congrats, Cole!

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Monday, May 3, 2010

Blog Chain: Characters vs. You

I've been invited to join a blog chain of published and aspiring authors. Thanks to the other members for inviting me and to fellow Crow Shaun for throwing my name in the hat!

This round's question comes from Sandra, who asked:

Have you ever created a character different from yourself in some significant way, such as (but not limited to) different gender, race, ethnic group, religion, or sexual orientation? If so, what, if any, research did you do to portray these differences? Was this character a main character, secondary character, or walk-on? Did these differences have an impact on the story?


As soon as I read this question, I grinned. Short answer: yes. Not-as-short answer...

I have a work in progress whose main character is a boy. He's eleven. He was born in a California migrant labor camp to a Mexican mother. He's also covered with thick, black hair. When his mother dies, his grandmother sells him to a traveling carnival, where he's billed as the Dog-Boy.

Now, I'm a tomboy whose friends are nearly all men, but I'm not male.

I was eleven for a little while, but that was 29 years ago.

I live in San Antonio, but I can barely order a taco plate in Spanish. Most of my family roots are in North-Central Europe, then later in Appalachia.

And, unless you guys aren't telling me something, I'd make a boring sideshow act.

So what makes me think I can write this kid?  That's the question I imagine being asked most about Hector.

The truth about Hector is that he -- and all his carnival cohorts -- showed up one day, fully formed. At first, he was a minor character in a shorter story, and I imagined him as about seven years old; I aged him up for the current work in progress. He's Hispanic because I'd read about a family group in Mexico, many of whose members have the same condition as Hector (hypertrichosis) and make their livings as performers.

Beyond his gender, age, ethnicity, and physical traits, though, Hector's story is common to the childhood experience: he loses his mother's protection, is thrust into a new world, makes friends, causes conflict, cares for and loses an animal friend, struggles to keep his promises, and falls in love.

All of which I can imagine based on my own experiences of starting school, meeting peers, having pets, and... falling in love. Add some historical research and language forays, and Hector came to life. Or so readers can decide.

The upshot: I think we can -- and should -- write whatever characters come to mind, especially if they're already so vivid when they arrive in our fingertips. Informed with personal experience, research, and imagination, any character can be made authentic for readers.

If you haven't yet, follow the blog chain back, starting with Rebecca, then visit Kate tomorrow for her response.

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